10
Secrets to Conquer The College Application Essay
1. Be concise. Even though the Common
Application main essay has only a suggested minimum of 250 words, and no upper
limit, every admissions officer has a big stack to read every day; he or she
expects to spend only a couple of minutes on the essay. If you go over 700 words,
you are straining their patience, which no one should want to do.
2. Be honest. Don't embellish your
achievements, titles, and offices. It's just fine to be the copy editor of the
newspaper or the treasurer of the Green Club, instead of the president. Not
everyone has to be the star at everything. You will feel better if you don't
strain to inflate yourself.
3. Be an individual. In
writing the essay, ask yourself, "How can I distinguish myself from those
thousands of others applying to College X whom I don't know—and even the ones I
do know?" It's not in your activities or interests. If you're going
straight from high school to college, you're just a teenager, doing teenage
things. It is your mind and how it works that are distinctive. How do you think?
Sure, that's hard to explain, but that's the key to the whole exercise.
4. Be coherent. Obviously, you don't want
to babble, but I mean write about just one subject at a time. Don't try to
cover everything in an essay. Doing so can make you sound busy, but at the same
time, scattered and superficial. The whole application is a series of snapshots
of what you do. It is inevitably incomplete. The colleges expect this. Go along
with them.
5. Be accurate. I don't mean just use
spell check (that goes without saying). Attend to the other mechanics of good
writing, including conventional punctuation in the use of commas, semi-colons,
etc. If you are writing about Dickens, don't say he wrote Wuthering Heights. If
you write about Nietzsche, spell his name right.
6. Be vivid. A good essay is often compared
to a story: In many cases it's an anecdote of an important moment. Provide some
details to help the reader see the setting. Use the names (or invent them) for
the other people in the story, including your brother, teacher, or coach. This
makes it all more human and humane. It also shows the reader that you are
thinking about his or her appreciation of your writing, which is something
you'll surely want to do.
7. Be likable. Colleges see themselves
as communities, where people have to get along with others, in dorms, classes,
etc. Are you someone they would like to have dinner with, hang out with, have
in a discussion section? Think, "How can I communicate this without just
standing up and saying it, which is corny." Subtlety is good.
8. Be cautious in your use of humor. You
never know how someone you don't know is going to respond to you, especially if
you offer something humorous. Humor is always in the eye of the beholder. Be
funny only if you think you have to. Then think again.
9. Be controversial (if you can). So many
kids write bland essays that don't take a stand on anything. It is fine to
write about politics, religion, something serious, as long as you are balanced
and thoughtful. Don't pretend you have the final truth. And don't just get up
on your soapbox and spout off on a sensitive subject; instead, give reasons and
arguments for your view and consider other perspectives (if appropriate).
Colleges are places for the discussion of ideas, and admissions officers look
for diversity of mind.
10. Be smart. Colleges are intellectual
places, a fact they almost always keep a secret when they talk about their
dorms, climbing walls, and how many sports you can play. It is helpful to show
your intellectual vitality. What turns your mind on? This is not the same thing
as declaring an intended major; what matters is why that subject interests you.
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